The Golden Touch by Anmol

One sunny hot day in a smelly stinky dungeon there was King Midas counting his money. Also an elf appeared in front of King Midas he was shocked to see an elf appear in his house and the elf showed him the golden touch.

Once he saw it King Midas didn’t want Goldie’s advice so he got the golden touch. As Goldie said he had the golden touch King Midas was very excited he wiggled his fingers and said the golden touch is mine but everything was turning to shiny gold even his food was turning to gold and he was very angry.

He went to his palace where it was filled with gold and he said Goldie oh Goldie Goldie! Suddenly he came back King Midas said please take it away so he took it away and left him with a brown stinky burger.

The Golden Touch by Hadyn

Long long ago King Midas was counting his gold special riches. King Midas was a selfish unkind king. He never cared for women. He wore a long red cape and lived in a colourful beautiful palace and the palace was surrounded by cold, glittery water but there was a bridge.

Then a little strange elf appeared on the table and the elf was called Goldie. Then Goldie gave King Midas a golden touch. Also he touched a statue then he turned the black small cat into gold.

Then he went to have his dinner but he couldn’t eat the massive, cooked turkey. Then he said to the mirror am I going to starve to death? Suddenly he started to cry and he ran to the dusty old basement.

When he got into the basement he started to shout Goldie take away the golden touch. So Goldie came back and took away the curse but Goldie wanted everything he possessed, so Goldie took away the golden touch.

Goldie gave him a burger with onions but took away everything he had.

The Golden Touch by Maisy

Long long ago there was a greedy, nasty man called King Midas. He lived in a dusty, private dungeon. King Midas was mean because he didn’t care about anyone. He didn’t like a wife or children but he liked his golden money.

Then an elf appeared called Goldie and he tried to explain to greedy King Midas. King Midas said I want gold not advice. Goldie gave King Midas the golden touch. King Midas was touching everything in his garden even his fluffy cute cat. He went to the large fancy dinner table and tried to drink a yummy lovely drink and it turned into pennies. He tried to eat a brown delicious chicken and it turned into gold as well. He was running because there were gold skeletons everywhere. He begged for the golden touch and Goldie gave King Midas a hamburger but nothing else.

Escape from Pompeii by Liam

Once upon a time there was a boy called Tranio and a girl called Livia. Tranio was looking out of the window also looking outside into the noisy town so she decided to creep out of the house and went to the harbour. Also she saw Livia and Livia said stop curling your hair and play knuckle bones, I got the right size she said. So they played knuckle bones and chased fast, enormous dogs. Then Tranio went to the stage and his father said sit down and learn because you’re next then everything began to shake but her father said don’t worry keep on rehearsing but Tranio left to find Livia. She said Livia! Livia where are you? Then he found her. The ground began to shake and then the mountain called Vesuvius was angry and ash and lava began to explode and fall like a slithering snake. Livia and Tranio ran on to the boat Livia said it’s too thick we have to go back. No said Tranio so they got on a boar and went to sleep.

Escape from Pompeii by Sophie

One very early morning there was a girl called Livia and she has a friend called Tranio. One hot, sunny day, Tranio and Livia heard a big noise. Way before that Tranio and Livia were born there was an earthquake. When Tranio and Livia heard the noise they thought it was just a noise but it was massive smoky Vesuvius. When they found out that it was Vesuvius the ground started to shake. After about three minutes Tranio and Livia’s biggest day ever was here bang! Livia and Tranio ran to a boat and got away.

Escape by Pompeii by Evie

Tranio was a cheeky, naughty boy. One day he looked out of his window and said “it’s so beautiful here is there any place like this?” He sighed often. He went to the harbour and watched wine, oil and spices. He also went to the forum and as they sang rumble down tumble down great city walls, feel the world stumble whilst the ground grumbles. The other hour he went to the theatre so he watched and waited until…banging and crumbling, smashing and falling. The place was falling down. Ten hours later “Livia, Liv come here!” Tranio’s father cjased a white fluffy goat when the room grumbled. You’d have died laughing. Come on! Nobody noticed two small children climb into a cargo ship. Then the big mount Vesuvius roared! Tranio I can hardly breathe. As the years passed Tranio and Livia were under an orange tree laying some fresh blue flowers. We will never forget you.

Escape from Pompeii by Archie

One day in a city called Pompeii young Archie was looking and he saw the protector of Pompeii glimmering in the sunlight, he was Vesuvius the gentle mountain. He sneaked into the harbour and he saw oil, wine and spices being carried to and off the boat. He went to the town hall he heard his favourite song rumble down, tumble down great city walls, hear the ground rumble. They fought over doing the song or not. He went to the theatre and saw the shows but then his attention wandered. Everything fell down, his dad said back to rehearsals please. He ran back to Molly’s house Molly! Molly! He shouted. Molly ran down stairs, let’s go. They ran to the harbour they got on a boat and went off. They heard and saw mighty Vesuvius raw and he blew with flames. A couple of years later they went back to Pompeii to lay some flowers for everyone who died there.

My week in France by Cayden

When we went to sunny, colourful France I tried to go to sleep but it was loud so I didn’t listen because I was being good and I didn’t want to spoil it. The second day we went on the night walk and at the beginning it wasn’t that dark but at the end it was pitch black and we had sticks on our heads for the drop bears so they didn’t pick us up and fly away!

My trip to France – by Georgia

My favourite part of France was the disco because I had fun dancing with Miss Smith. When I was in France I went to a sweet factory and sweet shop and I was watching the sweets being made and I bought some chocolate. Next I went to a bakery and I saw a funny guy and he taught me how to make croissants. After that we went to a place that a girl makes bread and I’ve watched her how to make bread. Finally I went for a shower with my sister then I had a disco with my disco clothes on and then I went to bed and I went to sleep. What an excellent week I had! When could I go next?